I enjoyed listening to your poems Dan. I didn’t quit get everything and would be pleased if you would send me them in written form so that I may have more time to think about them.
I liked the rhythm, colour, variation between each. Well done, my brilliant nephew.
ps Next time, pretend to be more confident and look the audience in the eyes, speak more slowly and you will be even more impressive.
Dan Eltringham 
I enjoyed listening to your poems Dan. I didn’t quit get everything and would be pleased if you would send me them in written form so that I may have more time to think about them.
I liked the rhythm, colour, variation between each. Well done, my brilliant nephew.
ps Next time, pretend to be more confident and look the audience in the eyes, speak more slowly and you will be even more impressive.
Love Lesley xxx
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